Score: 2

"I'm sorry"

submission: The Renaissance Chapter 1

date: April 2, 2005

You really need to shorten that backstory. Besides, it was really, really hard to read the text (it was pretty blurry). Maybe incorporate some of that writing into animation instead?

Score: 1

"Ugh"

submission: SuperMarioWorld True demo

date: April 2, 2005

Mario was incredibly difficult to control, the music ended extremely early on in the game, and I somehow fell through a platform.

Score: 8

"Wicked"

submission: Simpsons: That Happy Cat

date: April 1, 2005

Excellent animation quality! But it would have been much better to see some originality. I look forward to seeing more of your work!

Score: 7

"Funny, but couple of things"

submission: LOZ: Link's Return

date: April 1, 2005

First of all, know that I found this very entertaining. However, you need to work on your sound; you may want to invest in a better microphone. Second, your timing on gags is a little off. I often found myself getting impatient for the punchlines (for example, Pac-Man chased Link for quite a while before he got slashed).

Score: 9

"Funny!"

submission: LC: April Fooled

date: April 1, 2005

That was great. You should really work on the sound, though. At one point, I actually heard your mouse clicking to turn off the recorder.

Score: 9

"Really random, but really good"

submission: Strange Normalities

date: March 31, 2005

This was totally awesome! The only bad part is that the misuc ends before the animation, and that makes it seem a little weird.

Score: 3

"Okay, a few things"

submission: Swordsmen Police

date: March 30, 2005

First of all, I agree with you that it's perfectly alright to have something in a similar format as another work. However, this submission isn't just similar, it's exactly the same. Think about it: a fighter checking emails and messing with the writer's name. Also, the animation of the typing needs some major work, and straight lines would be nice for the computer.

You could potentially have a good series here if the format were given some originality. Like maybe he has IM conversations or something. I also like the "visual aid" component, and I think that would be a good thing to incorporate into a series.

Score: 0

"Not cool, man"

submission: Napoleon Numa Numa Dance

date: March 30, 2005

I could understand if you edited the film or something to match the beat, but all you did was slap the numa numa song to the film.

Score: 9

"Attacks"

submission: Bunny VS World [Beta 1.0]

date: March 30, 2005

Great game, really addictive! You just need to add some sort of attack that doesn't require the player to jump.

Score: 5

"???"

submission: Zelda Short: Queen Gohma

date: March 30, 2005

I don't get it...why is he scared of the fly?